i was given an assignment to write an ode... does this one work? angel kisses An ode to Chandler Chase macky my dear baby brother, who has passed away. A miscariaged child, lost at birth. his cry nobody heard. the hospital air is all around me filling my lungs with that stale,cold air. the air that smells so safe and clean all these words surround me. none sink in, and none sound right. he can't be dead. its not how it was supposed to be. tears trickle down are cheeks, the hospital church is where we all meet. cold hard wood, snd softly lit lights. sorrow and pain. its been so long ago but still, i love him my baby brother who was to be. and so every night before i sleep i send to him my hopes, dreams and wishes ans he'll send down his angel kisses.
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1 :
Yes, it is a beautiful ode, but you are an, M R
2 :
it's beautiful, I like it a lot There are a few grammatical errors though... I think it should be "a miscarried child" and then "tears trickle down OUR cheeks" Then a few other noticeable ones you'd see when you proof read it. :) It really is beautiful though.
3 :
I think it's great. Flows along very nicely.
4 :
Good,but there are grammatical problems.Can u answer my question about homework help?
5 :
So beautiful ode..
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